The Moon #FlashFiction

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He inadvertently found himself drawn towards the window. The moon had risen and though wane, it still reflected back an ethereal image. Memories of her sprang gushing like a gurgling waterfall.

In a different city, she stood transfixed near her bedroom window reminiscing the many evenings they had spent looking at the moon weaving dreams of a joyous future.

The moon that was miles away, descended in the hazy sky, now shining radiantly.

Long distance relationships can probably work, both thought at the same time.

The moon made them realize that when there is true love distance is immaterial.

 

(Word Count : 99 )

Linking up with Rochelle Wisoff who hosts a weekly flash fiction for writers. PHOTO PROMPT © Gah Learner

 

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About Meha Sharma

Dreamer,Writer,Mother,Fauji wife...all while striving to overcome something called 'Procrastination' :) I dabble in writing and write for @huffpostindia, @womensweb , @mycity4kids. I worked as a Business Analyst in an elite IT firm and as a professor in management colleges. Having earned an MBA degree in Human Resource Management and an MA degree in English Literature, I now pass on my wisdom to management students. To keep my sanity while striving to be a 'decent' mom to my ever inquisitive daughter, I tell myself, what Winnie the Pooh says,"My favourite day is today" :)
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26 Responses to The Moon #FlashFiction

  1. jillyfunnell says:

    So romantic – I hope they can move closer soon.

  2. Reminds me of old Hindi movies where both hero and heroine would look at the full moon and sigh or break into a romantic song. Your story has that kind of classic fee. Good one, Meha!

  3. Reminds me of old Hindi movies where both hero and heroine would look at the full moon and sigh or break into a romantic song. Your story has that kind of classic fee. Good one, Meha!

  4. Kriti Sharma says:

    another brilliant one…..loved it

  5. Dear Meha,

    I suspect if it’s true love they’ll find a way to move closer. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  6. Such a romantic piece!! 😀

  7. Well I agree with that last line! Sweet, romantic story. 🙂

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

  8. pennygadd51 says:

    When you share a strong love, distance is just an obstacle to overcome. How nice that their memories of nights together moon-gazing should spark that realisation!

  9. gahlearner says:

    Beautiful and romantic. Gazing at the moon at the same time and thinking about each other.

  10. Very romantic and heartwarming story!

  11. Piyali says:

    This is beautiful, Meha

  12. Dahlia says:

    A sweet and hopeful story 🙂

  13. Ravi S says:

    So beautifully created, very nice

  14. I loved the message. If their love is true enough, they’ll find a way?

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