The Premonition #FridayFotoFiction



They sauntered through the picturesque locales of the countryside.

The girls were a picture of gaiety. Their uproarious laughter reverberated through the overcast sky.

“I am so glad, we could keep our pact that whenever one of us gets married, we would all turn up and it would be like a reunion”, exclaimed one of them.

A truck wheeled its way towards them. The driver was a boorish man in his forties. He saw the women standing right in the middle of the road. He honked vehemently.

Just then out of the blue, the local radio channel in his car announced, “At 11 am today,  near Riveira hills, a bride and a group of bridesmaids met with a fatal accident when on their way to the wedding spot. None survived.”

The man instinctively peeked at the clock on the dashboard.

It said “10:59 AM”.

A shiver ran down his spine.


(150 words)

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About Meha Sharma

Dreamer,Writer,Mother,Fauji wife...all while striving to overcome something called 'Procrastination' :) I dabble in writing and write for @huffpostindia, @womensweb , @mycity4kids. I worked as a Business Analyst in an elite IT firm and as a professor in management colleges. Having earned an MBA degree in Human Resource Management and an MA degree in English Literature, I now pass on my wisdom to management students. To keep my sanity while striving to be a 'decent' mom to my ever inquisitive daughter, I tell myself, what Winnie the Pooh says,"My favourite day is today" :)
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18 Responses to The Premonition #FridayFotoFiction

  1. How brilliant is this! A story within a story! Gave me goosebumps, Meha. Your best, so far!
    Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction

  2. Anagha Yatin says:

    Thats superbly gripping and spooky Meha. What a tale!

  3. sukrisblog says:

    Oh my god! I read that twice.. really kept me hooked… excellent take on prompt.

  4. Shalzmojo says:

    Wow this was some tale; very eerie and sad Meha – great take on the prompt!!

  5. rashimital says:

    Woah! This was really a great take on the prompt, Meha. Spooky and gripping. super 🙂

  6. Tina Basu says:

    its a brilliant take Meha

  7. Rajlakshmi says:

    Damn what an ending!! Absolutely loved the story 😀

  8. Vinay Leo R. says:

    Haunting. Hope he wasn’t the one to hit them after forgetting to brake in the shock.

  9. This was brilliant! Spooky story though!

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